Fix It 101: The Fine Art of Helping Others With Comments and Their Hubs on Hubpages
61Improve Your Writing: The Constructive Critique of A Published Hub
Fixing up a hub is all about making improvements or at the very least improving your writing, but I suspect when I do this hub I'll be asking for it, in terms of a major fix up on every one of my other hubs-- in other words if you want traffic you need to improve your already fine hubs.. This request is one which goes back long before I joined up on hubpages, but one which I have not touched upon before.
Hubpages is a place where writers come together to showcase their published writing. This question was about telling someone that perhaps their writing is not good, or worst still does not help anyone, least of all them.
I take it from two views: one from the giver of said comments, and the other from the person receiving it. For the record, yes I know my hubs can use work, but that is what emails are for, thanks to everyone who does send email telling me where my mistakes are. you are a big help.
How can I help when it really needs help?: There are a few ways to do this, some of them are not as good as other, while other ways help promote good relationships on hubpages. So I'll use the example that everyone has come to know me for linking, and making money. With a twist of course.
"Given that this is a business, you need to make money by getting others to do the work for you. It doesn't make sense that after writing a hub you need to add all these links and then go and comment on other hubs and add more work to your day. It is better business practice to focus on making money by using the power of everyone else. ahve them create your links, and all you need to do is sit and wait.
Of course you use the power of Google to your advantage and use this as a means to an end. There is no work on your part other than writing hubs. Let the other people do the work, as you will make money no matter what."
Okay there you go, but you by now are probably going, hey wait a minute this is all wrong... but should I say something to her, I mean I know it is wrong... but?
In my view, yes you need to say something to fix up this mistake, as in this case it is a big one. Before you and say that "your hub sucks" or something to that effect remember that this writer might truly believe what they are writing. Or they are still learning about hubpages.
I'll be listing the ways that a writer on hubpages can make a really bad comment which will only demoralize another hub writer, to some of the best ways that you can do this. So these next few ones I would advise not to do, in fact never do this, as it will work against you and potentially ruin your own reputation in the process.
1) Telling the other hubber one of two things; "You Hub sucks" or worst still "your blog sucks." Yes I have received both these comments, and one has in fact more validity than the other. If someone writes "your blog sucks" they haven't been on hubpages long enough to know it is in fact called a hub. The other one means they have been here long enough to know that a hub is called a hub. Either way I have learned to politely ask them to elaborate. Most never do. To a new hub writer these comments can be devastating. So never ever do this one. Ever. Don't write it, I could say don't think it, but I would be an optimist on that front.
2) Personal Attacks: Now this is tied for number one but it is two because this is by far less frequent than the first. If I don't like a hub, I don't like the hub, and not the person. it doesn't take to much to figure out who said it and usually I have enough dignity not to fight these people, they are not worth my time. They will never have anything good to say ever if they try a personal attack. This is rude and out of line, but for me I simply shake my head and laugh it off. For all new hubbers, any attacks that simply say "you suck" or you are the worst writer on the planet" ignore them. Do not delete them, but spend more time proving that you have the talent you have. Not to them but to you.
These next two should be on your radar far more than the other two one will seem like a compliment but other is something as equally interesting:
3) This is the "hidden" critique: It begins with something like a this is such an awesome hub, and then goes on for a bit, but then throws in something like: but there are X things I hate about it, but thanks for the great hub. Now if you are going to make a complaint about the hub in question, it is bad form to butter the writer up. Just say it isn't good, and point out where it can be improved. If you don't think it is good you don't need to come up with a list of wonderful things about the hub. Just say it in the most polite way possible. Again these one are good to have since they will help you improve on your hubs and your next hub as well.
4) The out and out rant: This one can be at times humorous but take this one with a grain of salt. In a hub that has say 1,000 or more words there is often something that upon reading it makes the reader go... hey now way just one minute here! These comment are often nice and long and center on say three or four sentences that the hub has. Now, this type of comment isn't in and of itself a bad comment, it simply is too focused. Some people might find value in that comment. Others won't. I look at these comments as a thank you comment, since they usually bring more people into commenting for or against. At that point I simply moderate. Let the rants be, as these can be quite good. Just don't take it personally. In fact if they do have validity, you can usually do something about it... it is called edit, but don't be hasty about editing based on one comment.
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These last two are the best kinds you can do for other hubbers: Now I will say this I personally have used both, one more often than not.
5) Sending an email to the hubber in question telling them ways to improve their hubs. Now I get a lot of emails telling me where and how my hubs can be improved. This way is more private and if you don't have a beef with the writer and are willing to think why this person would have taken the time to do such a thing, this is a great help.
Yes, I still have about 50 more hubs to go before I get to the more recent ones people have sent me, but I do have a list! Really honestly this is the best, as I can print it out and go through it step by step.
Now if some one writes about making money ( back to the theme we began with) you can email them saying, that to me it seems like you don't think doing the work needed to support your own writing is there, why do you anticipate other trying to help you make money?" Politely of course.
I try to ask questions when I do this since it is something a new hubber can take for their next hubs... I hope. Still this is the best way to go especially if it is a new hubber or the mistake is really "big"
For more experienced hub writers there are a few ways you can do this, but be careful!
6) Tell another hub writer that perhaps this is not quite the suggestion you would use. Now, again to do this to a new hub writer is not a good thing, but to comment on a more experienced hub writers work is okay, mostly because they know that their work can be edited and will probably take it in good grace.
Of course I am not suggesting you go and do this to promote your work but rather, on hub writer to another who wants to see the other succeed. I have had more experienced hub writers than myself do this on my hubs. I respect them all the more for taking the time and energy to write a comment to help me improve.
Again this is fine art, if you want to make suggestions and you have been here for about say 2 months, and the person in question has been on hubpages for a while, make sure your facts and straight. (This is good business practice) In the case above you would be perfectly safe to ask why? Simply because it is obvious that this is not good business practice, and not something anyone should suggest doing in terms of making money. For less obvious things, check around and see what other hub writers suggest before making suggestions. (Again good business practice and great for learning as well)
Still any comments are better than no comments. So thanks these brave souls so much more because of it!
The Fine Art of Suggesting Improvements:
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Everyone can succeed in hubpages, but comments are of value, not only in terms of positive comments but the ones which can improve a willing person on hubpages. again use common sense when reading comments.
I can quickly look up a person who simply is a part of hubpages to find out the types of comments they make. Constructive critiques are great, and in the end will help, but also do this with the other person in mind.
We all write and publish hubs this is a business and some have more success than others, and some make more money than others, and some need a bit mroe help in other areas more than others, but working as a community will help everyone improve. Love what you do and don't let anyone take that away from you.
To your success.
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This is good, might I add that if you spend sometime fixing your older hubs up you'll have success there as well?
Thanks for the helpful hints. I am still in the learning curve as a hubber. I think I had one comment on a Hub of mine, but I did not click on the right spot to approve it. I went to the hub itself and there were no comments. My idea of making comments is to keep it positive.
I really owe you one for another hub of yours that recommended making small paragraphs and not just one large ranting hub. I am getting more traffic and I am finding editing is improved 100% by sectioning my hubs into smaller paragraphs.
Religious hubbers who are more vibrant and visible in the community never use harsh words on fellow hubbers who they think their hub sucks, it is mostly those flash in the pan hubbers who are fond of this.
I've had my own fare share of of diss, but I think it has really helped me get better, especially after my hiatus.
Thanks Bekky for showing these dissers and mood killers how it should be done.
I nominate you for the "most Caring hubber award" and going by your antecedents you'll win!
Good Day Rebecca E.
I just voted in the poll 'If I can't find something nice to say, I don't comment at all.' I have at least two reason for this: 1) I can tell if I'm not going to like a essay or article within the first few lines, and therefore I usually don't continue to the end; and 2)I guess I just be that kind of person.
By the way, I found my way to your work through a link given by Shadesbreath in one of his essays on improving hub writing (I think it was the one about the purple cow). I have been enjoying reading you essays on how hubbers can improve their work and increase their audience - and of course, also, to be frank, their earnings. What comes across most strongly for me about what you do, is the straightforward, direct, and earnest tone.
I am also impressed with the humility you show, in always acknowledging the work you need to do to improve your own craft. This is crucial, in my opinion, because teaching (and this is what you do with your tutorial hubs) can only remain dynamic, fresh, engaged, and vital, if the teacher, herself, is continually learning.
I call this being an "open circuit." Anyway, just a few more points.
1) I agree with your point about not deleting negative remarks, even rants on your hubs, as they can sometime serve a purpose. As long as the remarks aren't pornographic or something, I will not delete negative comments.
I read Mike Lickteig's comment about the vitriol two hubbers left about his poem. I would wear such remarks like badges of honor, because you know what they say in show business: "There's no such thing as bad publicity." Perhaps such comments might arose curiosity, to see what in the world could have arosed such a strong reaction; and as another commenter on this hub said, these negative comments might also start an interesting discussion.
2)Your point #3 about the hidden critique is a very stern and frank exposition. Yes, such an approach can seem like deceptive buttering up if it is done sloppily; and especially if the initial praise is empty and nonspecific -- perhaps indicating that the commenter is really chomping at the bit to unleash the criticism, which itself might indicate that the person doesn't really thing the hub in question is of basic merit at all.
3)I guess that's all. I was going to raise a point about specificity. But I reread the section in your hub, which my observation was going to be based on, but I had initially misunderstood. I'm straight now.
Anyway, good hub. Thanks
I always try and help a newbie out by suggesting putting in a photo or video that would enhance their hub. Many just like you and me join and are unaware of the many things that are available to them, I try to help someone by leaving a nice comment with a suggestion and leave it up to them if they want to use it. My theory is if the newbies hubs improve then Hubpages improves and we all benefit, useful and great hub as always !
Thanks again for another finely written and sensitive hub. I always enjoy reading your hubs through the months.
I think its good when someone points out mistakes, however with that being said, I agree with you, there is Always a nice and positive way of pointing out those mistakes, including doing it via email. I personally dont like critiquing people because I need more work on my own writing skills as well,..LOL Awesome Hub as Always !!!
Yes, positive words are healing to the soul:) Great Write!
I very seldom comment to critique, I leave those for emails, and only rarely.
What I really don't like seeing is someone writing hubs about how NOT to do something by pointing out the mistakes of others. Just not a good idea.
I personally have no issues if it is honest, constructive criticism being offered on my own hubs. (I prefer the email method if the hubber tends to be long winded.)
For those who have a mind to improvement, there is a forum for that http://hubpages.com/forum/23
Usually I do what I've learned from reading books on good management: "criticize" privately and greets publicly. It always works well. Unless it's a minor change which can be said on a comment, and this usually gets a thanks as a reply from the writer.
As regards me I've been pretty lucky with comments, and usually I only delete spam or "only for backlinks" comments; at the end an intelligent comment, either positive or negative, enriches the article and let me think in a different way about my ideas. As regards negative, disagreeing comments the Grand Master of dealing with them is James A Watkins: sometimes I disagree with him, and probably he disagrees with me too, but he always answer politely to everyone while at the same time maintaining his point of view.
Intelligent comments always enrich our writings.
Great hub as usual Rebecca, I hope I haven't used butter on this. ;)


















Rebecca E. Hub Author 4 months ago
John-- the more you fix and fix the better they are and the more likely you'll get traffic.